Sunday, 30 August 2015

Amazing Writers!!!


We are amazing writer's in Room 8.  We are getting ready for the up coming Poetry and Speech Competition.  We have been writing descriptive poems.  Last week we wrote a class poem. We choose the most interesting phrase from our own writing and joined it together to make a new piece of writing as a class.  We hope you enjoy it.....

I think pigs
Are really nice!

A pig, but not any pig.
It has horns on its nose and it has sharp pointy toes.
It is really, really smelly.
 Wild boars in the forest rolling in the mud.

Piglets have curly and fuzzy tails and are covered in mud.
Piglets have pink, clean bodies.
Piglets have small brown eyes and a little crinkly nose.
Its nose feels like sandpaper.
Piglets roll in mud, because mud is like sun screen.
It was so muddy that you couldn’t even see the pink piglet.
A piglet squealed so loud that all the other pigs heard him.
A sow is a mum and boar is a dad.
I think they are cute. Don’t you?

I think pigs

Are really nice!

Let us know what you think... We'd love your comments

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